Script Draft 2

Since getting new audio from the hair salon, we decided on one that we liked and thought about how to put it into our animation. There have been some changes to the narrative of the animation as it will now be set out as our character basically ranting about technology and not as a conversation like before. We chose 'Interview 01'. We typed up what the person said in a document and then worked on the script by cutting up bits and pieces together to make it make sense and not like an interview.

We used highlights in word and notes in Adobe Story to help us know which bits in the text went where in our script.

Interview Typed by AlexEdmonds

Interview Typed and Hightlighted by AlexEdmonds

Old Phone Draft 2 by AlexEdmonds

From Interview to Script Process

At the interviewing stage we decided to change our approach from interviewing older and younger people to just interviewing one person, a grandparent of one of ours. This had to be done over the phone by putting the telephone on loudspeaker and recording the sound with another device. We ended up changing a couple of questions from before and here is the questionnaire we used.

Questionnaire

From the recorded sound we typed up the answers from our chosen grandparent and highlighted some sections that we thought could be useful to start writing a script with. Here are the answers.

Answers from Questionnaire

From above we came up with the first draft of our script. At this point we decided to make it seem like a conversation between two old phones rather than an interview.

Narrative Script (Draft 1)